Story Board

We weren't too sure about the fourth shot on this storyboard where Hannah imagines stabbing Zeba in the eyes.

We thought this would give too much of the storyline away making the film boring to watch.

The last three shots on this storyboard were not effective at all. We decided to edit these and take some out.  This was because it was making the title sequence too long which is only suppose to be under 2 minutes.  We also thought too much of the plot was being given away in just the title sequence.

The third shot on this storyboard was of Hannah imagining of smashing a mirror in Zeba's head.  This was also going to make the title sequence too long and give too much of the story away.  We want our title sequence to create engima's for the audience making our title sequence more effective.  Therefore we placed our ideas on the title sequence just as a draft to get an idea of what we could do for our final.

We took this shot out of the title sequence which was of the fourth character Oscar, who was the mastermind behind killing Zeba and was encouraging Hannah too.  In this shot we would see oscar watching Hannah from the window.  However we had to keep in mind we are not telling the whole story in the title sequence, therefore we could not show all the characters at once in the first 2 minutes.

The third shot here, has been sightly changed now as we decided not to show Hannah's face when the title appears.  We decided that we would show Hannah's face with a smirk and then a blackout, where the title will appear.